Thursday, September 18, 2014

Finish the story.

She was sure this was where she had left him. She only left a few hours ago, and besides, a dead body can't move. The young girl aged 15 went on a frantic search throughout the forest to find the body. By the time dusk had arrived, she was sure she had searched the entire grove. As she decided to call it a night she felt an odd sensation flow through her bones. At that exact moment, she knew something was not right. Something was terribly wrong.
The teenage girl had decided to check up on her family. They only lived a few minutes away from the grove she was in. As the girl got nearer and nearer she began to realize what the lights were. The blue flashing lights were in front of her house. As she finally got near enough to her home she saw a blood chilling scene. Her mother and sister were strung up on ropes on the front windows. On the door though, was what had changed the girl. On the door was a body that looked too familiar. It was the missing body. The girl instantly knew she had caused her families death, and for all years to come, she never forgave herself. The girl went into a physcotic state and had to be on watch. The memory of her families bodies, burned in her mind forever.

2 comments:

  1. You used the contraction wasn't. I enjoyed the dark turn that your story took.

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  2. Watch capitalization throughout the story.
    You finished the story very nicely. It is a story I would not mind finish reading.

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